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My Alpha's Betrayal: Burning in the Flames of his Vengeance: Burning in the Ashes of his Vengeance: 1 (Magic of Kaeladia Series)

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Early on in the series, we immediately know that it’s going to be a slow start that develops into its own thing once we get a primary objective. Though, the story makes sudden twists and turns that you don’t really expect. I wasn’t able to guess that we’d get a one-night stand chapter only a little bit after getting introduced to the wholesome friendship of Charlene and Yileyna. Eventually, with its overwhelming number of erotic scenes, we forget that this is a werewolf novel and instead it feels more like an aimless adventure that just gives you the most random experiences. While this is most definitely a negative, it was enjoyable nonetheless, a confusing type of enjoyable. I nodded, my heart squeezing as I knew their fate was death… I turned and ran through the flames, refusing to let their sacrifice be wasted. Stopping suddenly at the sight before me, there in the middle of the clearing were the king and queen, tied and mortally wounded.

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My stomach lurched as a strong sense of Deja Vu from the day at the hospital returned to me. Somehow, I had been forewarned of this moment… When Theon had touched me… The pain in my body was suffocating and no matter how strong I tried to remain, I couldn’t keep the pain from my voice. Read My Alpha’s Betrayal: Burning In The Flames Of His Vengeance by Moonlight Muse. Genre: Chinese novels. Read the full novel online for free here

My Alpha’s Betrayal portrays itself as a werewolf-oriented story, though it never really shows. The concepts of a werewolf world apply, though they’re never executed or fleshed out in the beginning and middle chapters. The author really wants to take their time with developing the characters… and giving us erotic scenes. So, you managed to escape…” Theon’s cold, emotionless voice came. My heart thudded as I stared at the hooded man that now circled the king and queen, the sword in his hand dragging along the ground, grating against the stone. My Alpha's Betrayal: Burning In The Flames Of His Vengeance by Moonlight Muse updated at Novelxo.com. Belonging to the category of Badboy, Alpha,... Telling about life Yileyna. The struggle to survive the difficulties in life. Thank you for reading this book, and once again, I appreciate all the love, support, and kind words that everyone has given me. For the patience and trust you had in me with this story. This has been the darkest story I have written, and Theon was a character who was not meant to be just a hero. He had committed sins, some of which will forever remain. Yileyna, our innocent yet naughty Yileyna, where do I start? She was a young girl who, in a way, was infatuated with Theon, unable to see anything more than the love she felt for him. They both grew, both changed for the better, and only then were they able to truly be with one another. I am happy that I was able to pen this book the way I had envisioned it.

My Alpha’s Betrayal: Burning In The Flames Of His Vengeance

A ruthless smirk graced his handsome face. He crouched down, his fingers curling under my chin and making the sparks from his touch rush through me; pleasurable, yet equally painful. Sexual expressiveness is a common trope within this novel. At most chances possible, there will be a somewhat erotic remark made. This was seen first with Yileyna and Charlene going to the coast and swimming and Yileyna thirsting over Theon. Though, eventually, the author just gave us fully-fledged erotic scenes. While they aren’t necessarily badly written, their placement varies. Charlene swam away, leaving Yileyna alone. Theon shows up, demanding that she gets out. Before Yileyna did, all she could do was a remark on how attractive Theon was, he wanted them to meet the Alpha King. Don’t do this, Theon.” I whispered pleadingly. “Please, you have won, don’t taint your hands with the blood of so many.” sided with me before victory was ours. Those in the cells are those who chose to follow Theoden for their selfish gain. You have completed your redemption Theon, when you led this army and fought for justice and good. Let it go. You are not a villain.”I wore, I felt the intense pull of the bond. I had removed my armour, but I was still wearing what I had worn in Control her!” He roared at Theon, who was behind me in a flash, his arm tightening around my throat and waist. Theoden let out a terrifying roar of power, as he beheaded the king right before my eyes. In the same moment, with his other hand, he tore his heart from his chest. Before my eyes, he transformed into a tall muscular man, scars littered his body, and his muscles rippled with every step he took. A man that oozed of power. Grabbing a discarded cloak and wrapping it around his waist, he approached the king. “I told you, you would pay for your betrayal, Andres.” His voice was harsh and cold, yet held vast power. “Theoden…” The king spat coldly, his own aura swirling around him even if he was weakened. The two men who had started all of this… but what was the truth? What do I do? Theon’s eyes were on me, and I shook my head pleadingly. Don’t do this… “You didn’t even recognise my son.” Theoden smirked coldly. “The power of a simple enchantment…” + Also on print this book will have two books, and book 2 – My Alpha‘s Retribution–will have Yileyna in her siren form! My designer is working on it, and so far, she looks stunning!

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